David Stone’s “I Want You”

I’m going to be nice, because you said that this wasn’t ready for performance yet! There is a lot of tension in your arms when you are classic palming. None of your moves seem relaxed and natural. You obviously understand the “routine” part of the effect, so your next step is to make everything smoother. Get rid of the tension.

Let me put it this way: You are making all these strange movements, and they take away from the effect. It SHOULD look like you are doing NOTHING, and magic is still happening. Also, a script would be nice. Keep working on it, and thanks for posting it!

Rating: One Milk. But it’s empty, so that’s a good thing.

(Ratings are arbitrary, based on nothing, which is what arbitrary means…)